I finally banged out some editing last night. I went from page 100 to page 106, leaving me with only 16 pages left to edit. The pages I went through last night definitely need some tweaking and I may even drop half of a chapter because it doesn’t seem to do anything and is a bit repetitive. I’ll make those changes when I’m done editing for this round. That’s when I’ll fatten it up.
As for titles, the always inisghtful Auria Cortes gave me a suggestion that might work. I also came up with a good working title but I might end up using that as the final title. Since I don’t want to spoil the non-existant surprise, I won’t divulge it at this time. I’ll let the debate go on in my head a little while longer.